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Counting the numbers
Watching the clock;
Twiddling thumbs, hands interlocked.

A violent frustration
spreads up from the floor;
grasping toes, curled in resistance.
Body shaking, about to be lured.
Completely contained
Under an uncontrollable control.

Judgement;

Judging
Life's worth, who you are;
What you are.
And the room is solitude
And the air is insincere
And the air is unyielding
And it strangles you beyond fear

Fear becomes stringent,
Constricting
Instructing.
It is firm, demanding and anxious,
Pressing its vigour
Longer
Stronger

A link weakens;
A grip loosens,
A movement escapes
A body is freed;

Liberty

Yet there are remains
Unimportant remains;
Confinement remains;

Soul remains

When all that’s left is life itself.
You’ve been taken over and left:
Not for dead
But taken, outside in
And inside left.
Right is restored,
Wrong remains
A soul lost;
But a body remains.

A modern sarcoma
©2006-2009 ~allymcbally
:iconallymcbally:

Author's Comments

Yeh name taken from P!ATD song, just....where stuff is at the moment. EMO's the new cancer HA smoke that...sure if you know me you'll know what i'm rambling on about

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:iconjapheree:
:hug: beautiful Ally, very beautiful, you write very well honey and from the heart. 'And the air is unyielding And it strangles you beyond fear' really is such a powerful line...always here for you and my thoughts will be with you on Monday
:iconallymcbally:
thanks hun...can't go see him cos i'm ill :( which really sucks...i know it's not great but had to do summat which wasn't commenting on shakespeare's bloody languagein A&C chow x x x

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:iconjapheree:
Not great? i think it's bloody amazing (and i'm not just saying that cos i'm biassed or cos of whats going on...i never knew you could write like that, you should do more!)...dont do yourself down so.
:iconallymcbally:
i hate it..makes me sad when i read it or try and explain it, prolly shudnt av posted it but hey, it's out there now

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:iconmanbot68:
A divine piece of work. You are quite the wordsmith. :D

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Angels with silver wings
Shouldn't know suffering
I wish I could take the pain for you

- Depeche Mode


A member of ~macrophoto & *HDR-Club & ~LadybugsClub
:iconallymcbally:
ta

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:iconduckie2318:
Awesome submission as always! u rock :#1:
:iconallymcbally:
:) :bounce:

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:iconmeeden:
Powerfully touching -- especially this line hits home -- "When all that’s left is life itself." :silentkitty:

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